I like the changes. The prose has more life now.
I have some additional suggestions:
- Adjective phrase "specific console errors" could be made ... well ... more specific! Can you find phrasing that explains what makes the console error messages more specific?
- Seems like "without first having to" should be "without your first having to"
Also, I just now noticed this really cool thing:
- You can see how the markdown file will be rendered by viewing it in the Bitbucket UI!
See:
https://bitbucket.org/lorainelab/bioviz/src/master/htdocs/news.md
You can edit the file using the bitbucket user interface, which is very convenient! If you want to do that, go for it. And don't worry about adding loads of commits to the project history. Anything that is user-facing and involves communication through writing naturally undergoes lots of edits. And you can get a better sense of the writing process itself by seeing how writers improve and polish their work. Git makes that super-easy to witness.
Please review my changes at:
https://bitbucket.org/pbadzuh/bioviz_pbdev/branch/IGBF-2152#diff
Please offer any suggestions you may have.